Is it just me, or is that bowl of rice sort of camoflauged? The white rice blends in with the sky, and the bowl is the same colour as the ground. Maybe I need to calibrate my monitor.
In my opinion, the text in the 3rd panel looks just the tiniest bit awkward. It's mostly the 'r' I think. The trail following the "r" looks like it extends a little too far.
The colour scheme is great, and the final panel is amazing. I hope you get to see these in use.
Aye, the rice bowl is part of the first "level" of ground, the forks next, the wine bottle and so on. The white does blend in at some parts, but i put a grey layer of rice in the background, so it's still slightly defined, it looks fine bigger, i think. >__>
I see what you mean about the "r", i think i need another element in the right corner. I'll work on that more.
And thanks for the comment/critique. I hope these will be used, i have to see the owner tomrrow, and since he gave me complete freedom i'm preeetty sure that he'lll be buying these, if not with slight changes. But still!
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In my opinion, the text in the 3rd panel looks just the tiniest bit awkward. It's mostly the 'r' I think. The trail following the "r" looks like it extends a little too far.
The colour scheme is great, and the final panel is amazing. I hope you get to see these in use.
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I see what you mean about the "r", i think i need another element in the right corner. I'll work on that more.
And thanks for the comment/critique. I hope these will be used, i have to see the owner tomrrow, and since he gave me complete freedom i'm preeetty sure that he'lll be buying these, if not with slight changes. But
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